Designed for writers preparing their manuscript for publication, this service offers the depth of feedback needed to elevate your story and bring out its full potential.
A Developmental Edit is the most in-depth editorial service I offer, giving you detailed, chapter-by-chapter feedback to help you strengthen your story at every level – from structure and pacing to character development, narrative tension, and voice.
Detailed, chapter-by-
chapter feedback
throughout your manuscript
Sometimes a manuscript needs more than an overview
A 30-minute consultation to discuss the feedback and your next steps
Practical suggestions for strengthening your story
Feedback on structure, pacing, character development, voice, and consistency
In-line comments and annotations throughout your manuscript
A detailed editorial report tailored to your manuscript
Everything you need to revise with confidence
what's included
You're looking for a collaborative editorial process
You're preparing for self-publication
You're planning to query agents or publishers
You want detailed feedback throughout the text, not just a summary report
You've completed a manuscript and are preparing for serious revision
A Developmental Edit is ideal if:
Is This Right For You?
All Developmental Edits include a detailed editorial report, in-line manuscript comments, and a 30-minute consultation.
£1,800
120,000 words
£1,500
100,000 words
£1,200
80,000 words
£900
60,000 words
Price
Manuscript Length
£15 per 1,000 words
Pricing
If you're looking for deeper editorial guidance, a detailed roadmap for revision and a clearer understanding of how the different elements of your story work together, a Developmental Edit is right for you.
A Developmental Edit shows you where those issues appear throughout the manuscript and how they affect the reader's experience.
A Manuscript Assessment tells you what needs attention.
A more detailed
roadmap for revision
Why Choose a Developmental Edit?