Together, we'll identify what's capturing a reader's attention, what's holding the story back, and how to create a stronger opening that keeps readers turning the page.
Whether you're preparing to query agents, submit to publishers, or simply want to know if your opening chapter is working, First Chapter Surgery provides focused, professional feedback on the pages that matter most.
Focused, professional feedback on the pages
that matter most
You only get one chance to make a first impression
A 30-minute consultation to discuss the feedback and your next steps
A marked-up manuscript with in-line comments
Practical suggestions for strengthening your opening pages
Comments on your hook, pacing, voice, character introduction, and reader engagement
Detailed feedback on your opening chapter or first 5,000 words
Everything you need to strengthen your opening
What's included
You're looking for focused, actionable guidance
You'd like professional feedback before investing in a larger edit​
You're unsure whether your opening pages are working​
You're entering competitions or submission opportunities​
You're preparing to query literary agents​
First Chapter Surgery is ideal if:
Is This Right For You?
Includes in-line editorial feedback and a 30-minute consultation.
£65
Pricing
First Chapter Surgery helps ensure your story starts as strongly as possible.
A weak opening can stop an otherwise excellent manuscript from getting the attention it deserves.
A strong opening creates curiosity, establishes confidence, and gives readers a reason to keep going.
Agents do too.
Readers make decisions quickly.
Readers make decisions quickly
Why Your First Chapter Matters